diff --git a/marketing-site/components/Letter.jsx b/marketing-site/components/Letter.jsx
index 780501f..f7caed1 100644
--- a/marketing-site/components/Letter.jsx
+++ b/marketing-site/components/Letter.jsx
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@ export default function Letter() {
       <div className="letter-in">
         <span className="spec reveal">A note on why</span>
         <p className="letter-body reveal">
-          Most AI advice is either hype or theory — and neither survives contact with real
-          work. We’re writing the guide we wish we’d had: workflows that <em>actually run</em>,
-          with the <span className="mark">guardrails built in</span>, kept honest by the people
-          who use them every day. For a lot of us, mastering these tools isn’t optional
-          anymore — it’s how you build the life you’re working toward. Fund the first edition,
-          and you don’t just get the book — you help decide what goes in it.
+          Most AI advice is hype or theory, and neither survives contact with real work. We are
+          writing the guide we wish we had: workflows that <em>actually run</em>, with the{" "}
+          <span className="mark">safeguards built in</span>, kept current by the people who use
+          them every day as the tools move. For a lot of us, fluency with these tools is how you
+          build the life you are working toward. Fund the first edition and you help decide what
+          goes in it.
         </p>
         <div className="sign reveal">
           <span className="scrawl">The co-authors</span>